The story is about a gril and a blind woman. They wewe taking the same bus and also had to take another bus to transfer to another place. When they sat in the station to wait for bus coming a man came to the woman. The girl heard the man said to the woman he will take her to where she want to go, then the man took the woman away. But the girl thought the man said wasn't ture. The way was wrong from the eaxctly way. She thought it started be something wrong. Shewent to asked someone for help, but the people said to her"it's none of your business." She made up her mind to talked to the man his way was wrong. Suddenly the man run away. Finally she took the woman to the station savely. The part of the story I like the most is the man took the woman away, it was really very exciting. And the girl talked to the man, it really make me very nervous for what will happen later.
The girl in the story is very passionable, she didn't afraid of the man and even though the other man told her it was none of her business, she still want to help the woman. And the other man was very heartless, he didn't want to help the other, how selfish was him? If one day something happened to him also none one will come to help him.
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I think this story is a little tricky, doesn't it? The woman gave the vender a glad smile seems to suggest that something unusual. This part makes me guess that the woman was the real prisoner!
I have already finished reading your article. I think you did a great job, but still have s little bit mistake. Here are some mistakes that I found.
First, on line one the “wewe” should be “were”. Second, on line eight the sentence: but the people said to her"it's none of your business." I think in should better have a blank between her and the mark. The last one on line ten the word “run” you maybe should change use the word “ran”, it’s because you use past tense to tell us about this story in you summary. Anyway, these are just a little mistake it just need more careful next time.
I learn a lot from your article because we choose the some article but we have different opinion about this. Thank you and I hope we can share more in the future.
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